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Re: new poetry writer
Welcome to YWS. I'm Rick. I hope you enjoy the site as much as we all do. After you get 25 reviews, you can access the YWS chatroom and talk ...
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Re: Ten Weeks
My entry for the instructors "On Fire" contest. Inspired by picture #1 Ten Weeks Ten weeks ago, my hands would be shaking In anticipation of what I'm about to do. ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: The Loveliest Spice
Hello dear reader. :) Got here some poem I wrote a year ago, praising the wonderful entity of the Great Holy One. :) It's from the love and fire burning ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: blinkk.
'Blink' When you wake up And realize, Everything about you is different. The shades in your skin, Maybe the person beyond your appearance. We all walk around blind, Unable to ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: Sex- To post, or not to post
I agree with Via, Suz, and Heidi. I think if there's an R rating, it's ok. But don't try to get too detailed over a sex scene. That can make ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Tell me I'm in love: Review #2
“Tell me I’m in Love” This is not a love songMy dreams almost came true When I first laid my eyes upon you I hate it when we part I’d ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: The truth about celebrity.
Any constructive criticism is welcomed.. Media hype and fans galore Is what makes a celebrity Talent is a plus But not a must So much for originality Journalists fight then ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: You are Woman
You are beautiful beyond even your own knowing, Akin to when light strikes the crevace of a diamond is your face in it's glowing, Womanhood, Maturity, and intellect manifest in ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
It'a fine for me, other than the fact my computer is slow. :wink: -Rick.
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Hello from another newbie!
Welcome to YWS. I'm Rick. I hope you enjoy the site as much as we all do. After you get 25 reviews, you can access the YWS chatroom and talk ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Hola!
Welcome to YWS. I'm Rick. I hope you enjoy the site as much as we all do. After you get 25 reviews, you can access the YWS chatroom and talk ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Writer's Block revised
I look at my paper; It's blank. I look at my pencil; It's sharp. I've been sitting here for hours, Haven't written a word; I stare out the window Mind ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: The Last Black Horse
Over hill and over dale, Through the tempest, wild gale, The last black horse raced alone Chased by the man, face so pale. The night clung heavy, and cold, Rain, ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Why didn't anyone warn me?
Welcome to YWS. I'm Rick. I hope you enjoy the site as much as we all do. After you get 25 reviews, you can access the YWS chatroom and talk ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Mentality of a dangerous mafia.
I like this. I like that it's really deep. Try to put a space between each sentence though. And try to add commss inbetween words. Also, I think this needs ...
Apr 9, 2008
